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TST-0002: Mouse

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The Severis Tales Story
Entry: 0002
Title: Mouse
Dates: Saturnday, Septela 13, 1103
Word Count: 9,662
Publish Date: November 18, 2018
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Mouse is a story from The Severis Tales.

Story Information

Basic Details

  • Story Number: 0002
  • Story Title: Mouse
  • Word Count: 9,662
  • Publication Date: November 18, 2018

Plot

On the heels of Larry's first two tumultuous weeks of college, Leena and Xiveer are once again visited by the uptight and selfish Brackneed Vendyor, who comes to taunt them at their store, Severis General Goods. However, Brackneed is the least of their worries, as, somehow, a rodent invades their shop. Desperate to rid of the creature, the duo devise a bizarre plan to kick the furry creature out once and for all.

Meanwhile, Reena MacTavish, their only employee, deals with another form of pressure, this time with one of their dedicated customers.

Characters

Main Characters

  • Xiveer Severis - Co-owner of Severis General Goods with his wife, Leena.
  • Leena Severis - Co-owner of Severis General Goods with her husband, Xiveer.
  • Reena MacTavish - The Severis' only employee, homesick and lonely.
  • Brackneed Vendyor - The upper-class west end proprietor of Brackneed's.
  • The Rodent - A monster rodent that infiltrates Severis General Goods.

Secondary Characters

  • Mrs. Judith Aptow - Owner of Aptow potato farm.
  • Mila Daruginna - Owner of Mila's pub.
  • Barnaby - One of Brackneed's employees.
  • Veera - One of Brackneed's employees.
  • Tarla Wilfellow - A college student and one of Larry's associates.
  • Mrs. Bigglesworth - An elderly customer who, for some reason, runs out screaming from Severis General Goods.

Notes

This story is the second in the initial trilogy of stories to get TST off and running. Mouse introduces the enigmatic and overbearing Brackneed Vendyor, the Severis' arch-rivals, both in society and in business. Mila and Reena are introduced here as well, along with the occasional characters Barnaby and Veera.

Another semi-primary character, Mrs. Aptow, is introduced here for the first time.

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