TST-0007: The New Neighbours - Revision history

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	\|TST_story_pubdate=August 12, 2020		\|TST_story_pubdate=August 12, 2020
	\|TST_story_url=https://patrick-rivers.ca/~~severis~~-~~story-list~~/tst-story-7		\|TST_story_url=https://patrick-rivers.ca/tst/tst-stories/tst-story-7
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	The vacant plot at 10 Pine Street is purchased and Leena must learn another life lesson the hard way when she harbours feelings of jealousy and irrational anger about them. Meanwhile, Larry has a random encounter with one of the other members of Pine Street, which leads to an unexpected turn of events.		The vacant plot at 10 Pine Street is purchased and Leena must learn another life lesson the hard way when she harbours feelings of jealousy and irrational anger about them. Meanwhile, Larry has a random encounter with one of the other members of Pine Street, which leads to an unexpected turn of events.

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	\|TST_story_dates=Mondas, Marrin 6, 1104 - Saturnday, Marrin 21, 1104		\|TST_story_dates=Mondas, Marrin 6, 1104 - Saturnday, Marrin 21, 1104
	\|TST_story_pubdate=August 13, 2020		\|TST_story_pubdate=August 12, 2020
	\|TST_story_url=https://patrick-rivers.ca/severis-story-list/tst-story-7		\|TST_story_url=https://patrick-rivers.ca/severis-story-list/tst-story-7
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	The vacant plot at 10 Pine Street ~~has been~~ purchased and Leena must learn another life lesson the hard way when she ~~starts to feel jealous~~ and ~~irrationally angry~~ about them. Meanwhile, Larry has a random encounter with one of the other members of Pine Street which leads to an unexpected turn of events.		The vacant plot at 10 Pine Street is purchased and Leena must learn another life lesson the hard way when she harbours feelings of jealousy and irrational anger about them. Meanwhile, Larry has a random encounter with one of the other members of Pine Street, which leads to an unexpected turn of events.

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	* 16 Pine Street: [[Martha Craftberg\|Martha]], [[Melbern Craftberg\|Melbern]], [[Shanna Craftberg\|Shanna]], and [[Berrick Craftberg\|Berrick]] Craftberg		* 16 Pine Street: [[Martha Craftberg\|Martha]], [[Melbern Craftberg\|Melbern]], [[Shanna Craftberg\|Shanna]], and [[Berrick Craftberg\|Berrick]] Craftberg
	* [[Redge Tradford]]		* [[Redge Tradford]]
	* [[Mrs. Aptow]]		* [[Mrs. Judith Aptow]]

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	This story introduces two major elementws in to the world of Algenon that as well impacts the Severis Family. First is the wide range of families of Pine Street. The character of Mira Hutter has a pronounced influence on one character's life. Second is the new family that is warmly welcomed to the community. These characters will have their own lives and stories, to flourish and bring to life an entire community.		This story introduces two major elementws in to the world of Algenon that as well impacts the Severis Family. First is the wide range of families of Pine Street. The character of Mira Hutter has a pronounced influence on one character's life. Second is the new family that is warmly welcomed to the community. These characters will have their own lives and stories, to flourish and bring to life an entire community.
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Privers at 21:28, 14 August 2020

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	* 14 Pine Street: [[Franklin Ferguson]]		* 14 Pine Street: [[Franklin Ferguson]]
	* 16 Pine Street: [[Martha Craftberg\|Martha]], [[Melbern Craftberg\|Melbern]], [[Shanna Craftberg\|Shanna]], and [[Berrick Craftberg\|Berrick]] Craftberg		* 16 Pine Street: [[Martha Craftberg\|Martha]], [[Melbern Craftberg\|Melbern]], [[Shanna Craftberg\|Shanna]], and [[Berrick Craftberg\|Berrick]] Craftberg
			* [[Redge Tradford]]
			* [[Mrs. Aptow]]

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			This story introduces two major elementws in to the world of Algenon that as well impacts the Severis Family. First is the wide range of families of Pine Street. The character of Mira Hutter has a pronounced influence on one character's life. Second is the new family that is warmly welcomed to the community. These characters will have their own lives and stories, to flourish and bring to life an entire community.
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	* [[Toslin Narrows]]		* [[Toslin Narrows]]
	* [[Bert Craftberg]]		* [[Bert Craftberg]]
	* [[Bertie Chester]]		* [[Bertram "Bertie" Chester]]
	* [[Sara Chester]]		* [[Sara Satubomishi-Chester]]
	* [[Mia Chester]]		* [[Mia Chester]]

Privers at 21:21, 14 August 2020

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	\|TST_story_title=The New Neighbours		\|TST_story_title=The New Neighbours
	\|TST_story_wordcount=13,318		\|TST_story_wordcount=13,318
	\|TST_story_dates=Mondas,		\|TST_story_dates=Mondas, Marrin 6, 1104 - Saturnday, Marrin 21, 1104
	\|TST_story_pubdate=~~December 20~~, ~~2019~~		\|TST_story_pubdate=August 13, 2020
	\|TST_story_url=https://patrick-rivers.ca/severis-story-list/tst-6-~~story~~		\|TST_story_url=https://patrick-rivers.ca/severis-story-list/tst-story-7
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	~~Graduating artist Leah Evans is selected to create a painting that would be showcased~~ at the ~~Barlett College Senior Student Art Exhibition~~. ~~She finds the perfect person: Terrence Howard~~, ~~in stride, coming from lecture classes. After some awkward conversation, Terrence agrees. All eyes are on them as~~ the ~~painting is unveiled and causes quite~~ an unexpected ~~ruckus and headache&em;not only for Leah and Terrence, but for college secretary Mr. Robern Arryls as well~~.		The vacant plot at 10 Pine Street has been purchased and Leena must learn another life lesson the hard way when she starts to feel jealous and irrationally angry about them. Meanwhile, Larry has a random encounter with one of the other members of Pine Street which leads to an unexpected turn of events.

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	==== Main Characters ====		==== Main Characters ====
	* [[~~Leah Evans~~]] ~~- Senior art student who is on her graduation year~~		* [[Leena Severis]]
	* [[~~Terrence Howard~~]] - Larry ~~and Janessa~~'~~s friend and the subject of Leah~~'~~s painting~~		* [[Xiveer Severis]]
	* [[~~Janessa Vendyor~~]] ~~- Terrence's friend and former subject to one of Leah's previous paintings~~		* [[Larry Severis]]
	* [[~~Tarla Wilfellow~~]] ~~- Larry's best friend next to Elcra~~		* [[Mira Hutter]]
			* [[Walter Hutter]]
			* [[Gerta Hutter]]
			* [[Pon Po'nomer]]
			* [[Natafasma Po'nomer]]
			* [[Toslin Narrows]]
			* [[Bert Craftberg]]
			* [[Bertie Chester]]
			* [[Sara Chester]]
			* [[Mia Chester]]

	==== Secondary Characters ====		==== Secondary Characters ====
	* [[~~Mr. Arryls~~\|~~Mr. Robern Arryls~~]] ~~- Official college secretary~~		* [[Elcra Winterbottom]]
	* [[~~Fen Tivet~~]] ~~- The emcee for the art exhibit~~		* [[Reena MacTavish]]
	* [[~~Larry~~ Severis]] ~~- Larry Arendor Severis~~, ~~the elder~~ and ~~anxiety-laden child of the Severis family~~		* [[Mila Daruginna]]

			==== Other Characters Mentioned But Not Directly Involved ====
			* 7 Pine Street: [[Korrica Po'nomer\|Korrica]] and [[Korrico Po'nomer\|Korrico]] Po'nomer
			* 8 Pine Street: [[Ardanna Narrows\|Ardanna]] and [[Tyrel Narrows\|Tyrel]] Narrows
			* 12 Pine Street: [[Michale Severis]]
			* 13 Pine Street: [[Karl Hutter]]
			* 14 Pine Street: [[Franklin Ferguson]]
			* 16 Pine Street: [[Martha Craftberg\|Martha]], [[Melbern Craftberg\|Melbern]], [[Shanna Craftberg\|Shanna]], and [[Berrick Craftberg\|Berrick]] Craftberg

	\|TST_story_notes=		\|TST_story_notes=
	* This is the first story to use mainly secondary characters. This was intended to try and sway away from core Severis family-related tales, and tell a story in the lives of the people they know. The only primary character that stars in this story is Larry.
	* Leah Evans is introduced as a character into <em>The Severis Tales</em> universe.
	* This story establishes Mr. Arryls' first name as Robern and is commonly called Bob.
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|TST_story_entry=0007
|TST_story_title=The New Neighbours
|TST_story_wordcount=13,318
|TST_story_dates=Mondas,
|TST_story_pubdate=December 20, 2019
|TST_story_url=https://patrick-rivers.ca/severis-story-list/tst-6-story
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Graduating artist Leah Evans is selected to create a painting that would be showcased at the Barlett College Senior Student Art Exhibition. She finds the perfect person: Terrence Howard, in stride, coming from lecture classes. After some awkward conversation, Terrence agrees. All eyes are on them as the painting is unveiled and causes quite an unexpected ruckus and headache&em;not only for Leah and Terrence, but for college secretary Mr. Robern Arryls as well.

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==== Main Characters ====
* [[Leah Evans]] - Senior art student who is on her graduation year
* [[Terrence Howard]] - Larry and Janessa's friend and the subject of Leah's painting
* [[Janessa Vendyor]] - Terrence's friend and former subject to one of Leah's previous paintings
* [[Tarla Wilfellow]] - Larry's best friend next to Elcra

==== Secondary Characters ====
* [[Mr. Arryls|Mr. Robern Arryls]] - Official college secretary
* [[Fen Tivet]] - The emcee for the art exhibit
* [[Larry Severis]] - Larry Arendor Severis, the elder and anxiety-laden child of the Severis family

|TST_story_notes=
* This is the first story to use mainly secondary characters. This was intended to try and sway away from core Severis family-related tales, and tell a story in the lives of the people they know. The only primary character that stars in this story is Larry.
* Leah Evans is introduced as a character into <em>The Severis Tales</em> universe.
* This story establishes Mr. Arryls' first name as Robern and is commonly called Bob.
}}