TST-0002: Mouse - Revision history

Privers at 05:39, 6 January 2021

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	\|TST_story_dates=Saturnday, Septela 13, 1103		\|TST_story_dates=Saturnday, Septela 13, 1103
	\|TST_story_pubdate=November 18, 2018		\|TST_story_pubdate=November 18, 2018
	\|TST_story_url=https://patrick-rivers.ca/~~severis-story~~-~~list~~/~~severis~~-story-2		\|TST_story_url=https://patrick-rivers.ca/tst/tst-stories/tst-story-2/
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	On the heels of Larry's first two tumultuous weeks of college, Leena and Xiveer are once again visited by the uptight and selfish Brackneed Vendyor, who comes to taunt them at their store, Severis General Goods. However, Brackneed is the least of their worries, as, somehow, a rodent invades their shop. Desperate to rid of the creature, the duo devise a bizarre plan to kick the furry creature out once and for all.		On the heels of Larry's first two tumultuous weeks of college, Leena and Xiveer are once again visited by the uptight and selfish Brackneed Vendyor, who comes to taunt them at their store, Severis General Goods. However, Brackneed is the least of their worries, as, somehow, a rodent invades their shop. Desperate to rid of the creature, the duo devise a bizarre plan to kick the furry creature out once and for all.

Privers at 00:54, 24 November 2019

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	==== Secondary Characters ====		==== Secondary Characters ====
			* [[Mrs. Judith Aptow]] - Owner of Aptow potato farm.
	* [[Mila Daruginna]] - Owner of Mila's pub.		* [[Mila Daruginna]] - Owner of Mila's pub.
	* [[Barnaby]] - One of Brackneed's employees.		* [[Barnaby]] - One of Brackneed's employees.
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	\|TST_story_notes=		\|TST_story_notes=
	This story is the second in the initial trilogy of stories to get TST off and running. <em>Mouse</em> introduces the enigmatic and overbearing Brackneed Vendyor, the Severis' arch-rivals, both in society and in business. Mila and Reena are introduced here as well, along with the occasional characters Barnaby and Veera.		This story is the second in the initial trilogy of stories to get TST off and running. <em>Mouse</em> introduces the enigmatic and overbearing Brackneed Vendyor, the Severis' arch-rivals, both in society and in business. Mila and Reena are introduced here as well, along with the occasional characters Barnaby and Veera.

			Another semi-primary character, Mrs. Aptow, is introduced here for the first time.
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Privers at 00:29, 24 November 2019

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	* [[Reena MacTavish]] - The Severis' only employee, homesick and lonely.		* [[Reena MacTavish]] - The Severis' only employee, homesick and lonely.
	* [[Brackneed Vendyor]] - The upper-class west end proprietor of Brackneed's.		* [[Brackneed Vendyor]] - The upper-class west end proprietor of Brackneed's.
			* The Rodent - A monster rodent that infiltrates Severis General Goods.

	==== Secondary Characters ====		==== Secondary Characters ====
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	* [[Veera]] - One of Brackneed's employees.		* [[Veera]] - One of Brackneed's employees.
	* [[Tarla Wilfellow]] - A college student and one of Larry's associates.		* [[Tarla Wilfellow]] - A college student and one of Larry's associates.
	* ~~A Monster Rodent~~.		* Mrs. Bigglesworth - An elderly customer who, for some reason, runs out screaming from Severis General Goods.

	\|TST_story_notes=		\|TST_story_notes=
	This story is the second in the initial trilogy of stories to get TST off and running. <em>Mouse</em> introduces the enigmatic and overbearing Brackneed Vendyor, the Severis' arch-rivals, both in society and in business. Mila and Reena are introduced here as well, along with the occasional characters Barnaby and Veera.		This story is the second in the initial trilogy of stories to get TST off and running. <em>Mouse</em> introduces the enigmatic and overbearing Brackneed Vendyor, the Severis' arch-rivals, both in society and in business. Mila and Reena are introduced here as well, along with the occasional characters Barnaby and Veera.
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{{TST_story
|TST_story_entry=0002
|TST_story_title=Mouse
|TST_story_wordcount=9,662
|TST_story_dates=Saturnday, Septela 13, 1103
|TST_story_pubdate=November 18, 2018
|TST_story_url=https://patrick-rivers.ca/severis-story-list/severis-story-2
|TST_story_plot=
On the heels of Larry's first two tumultuous weeks of college, Leena and Xiveer are once again visited by the uptight and selfish Brackneed Vendyor, who comes to taunt them at their store, Severis General Goods. However, Brackneed is the least of their worries, as, somehow, a rodent invades their shop. Desperate to rid of the creature, the duo devise a bizarre plan to kick the furry creature out once and for all.

Meanwhile, Reena MacTavish, their only employee, deals with another form of pressure, this time with one of their dedicated customers.

|TST_story_characters=
==== Main Characters ====
* [[Xiveer Severis]] - Co-owner of Severis General Goods with his wife, Leena.
* [[Leena Severis]] - Co-owner of Severis General Goods with her husband, Xiveer.
* [[Reena MacTavish]] - The Severis' only employee, homesick and lonely.
* [[Brackneed Vendyor]] - The upper-class west end proprietor of Brackneed's.

==== Secondary Characters ====
* [[Mila Daruginna]] - Owner of Mila's pub.
* [[Barnaby]] - One of Brackneed's employees.
* [[Veera]] - One of Brackneed's employees.
* [[Tarla Wilfellow]] - A college student and one of Larry's associates.
* A Monster Rodent.

|TST_story_notes=
This story is the second in the initial trilogy of stories to get TST off and running. <em>Mouse</em> introduces the enigmatic and overbearing Brackneed Vendyor, the Severis' arch-rivals, both in society and in business. Mila and Reena are introduced here as well, along with the occasional characters Barnaby and Veera.
}}